I am learning to use information from the text to create a presentation.
I am a year 4 learner at Tautoro School in Tautoro Northland, New Zealand. I am in Room 5 and my teacher is Mrs Paraha.
Friday, July 31, 2020
Recount Writing-The Flood
WALT to make our writing more interesting for our readers.
The flood
On Friday morning I woke up in a fright from all the noise. The noise was coming from outside my house. I got up fast and looked out the window. I covered my mouth with my hands because I was so shocked by what I saw.
I saw heavy, pouring rain making huge puddles of water everywhere. The rain was making puddles and they were connecting to other puddles. It was flooding and I was scared. My heart was pounding fast.The flood water was gushing and rushing all over my paddock. There were holes and lots of damage in my paddocks. It was pushing mud and paru stuff all over my road. I was scared that our car was going to slip and crash into the trees and make a massive fire. All the paru stuff was getting on our house and our windows so wet, we got the mop and washed all of the dirt off our house.
We finally were finished cleaning up our house.
Next we jumped into the flood. We were doing bombs and it was very very fun swimming in the flooded waters.
In the afternoon the rain slowed down. We felt happy because the flood waters were going away.
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