Recount Writing-On the quad

I am learning to make my writing more interesting for my readers.
This is the published copy of my writing

Yesterday afternoon me and Joeche
were playing on the quad.  First, we were doing drifts.
Then we were going over bumps.
It was funny and fun.  We gave turns.
We went around a big pile of prickles.
The spark plug came off.
We put the spark plug back on. 
I started it. I had a great time.

I said to Joshua, “That was a big bump.” 
Joeche said to me, “Let’s go up and watch Login.” 
We went up and watched Login. It was funny.
We were laughing.  I had a cool time and
we were laughing hard out.