
I am a year 4 learner at Tautoro School in Tautoro Northland, New Zealand. I am in Room 5 and my teacher is Mrs Paraha.
Monday, June 29, 2020
Thursday, June 25, 2020
Recount Writing-Riding my quad
WALT use the correct structure and language in our writing
Riding my quad
On Saturday afternoon I rode my Quad around our
paddock down the bottom at our farm.
paddock down the bottom at our farm.
Taria was riding the quad with me.
First I did some skids and drifties.
It was very fun because it was like we were
chasing some bad guys. It was fun.
It was very fun because it was like we were
chasing some bad guys. It was fun.
Next I rode my quad around the bumps.
We were going up and down and going through things.
We were going up and down and going through things.
There was a BIG pile of prickles so I went around it
and I got pricked. Ouch! I got the prickle out.
and I got pricked. Ouch! I got the prickle out.
After that I went to do some more drifties and
we saw a sand tornado.
we saw a sand tornado.
Next I went home to watch youtube of scary videos.
I watched a video where there was a guy who
caught slender man climbing a building.
Me and Taria were scared. Finally it got dark.
I had amazing time.
caught slender man climbing a building.
Me and Taria were scared. Finally it got dark.
I had amazing time.
Tuesday, June 16, 2020
Monday, June 15, 2020
Recount Writing-Going to the Skate Park
I have been learning to write interesting stories for my readers.
Going to the skate park
On Saturday afternoon my family and I went to the skatepark in Kaikohe to play on the playground. First I got my skateboard and I slid down the ramp. I felt amazing because it was fun. Then we slid down the massive hole. I thought that was cool. Next we went to the park to play on the swings. I was swinging very high. It was getting scary. I felt like I was getting butterflies in my tummy. After that mum got me down. Then we went home.
All my cousins were there. We were playing fortnite and 1b1.
We were in a real game. I got the win and I got so much good loot. I felt happy. I had a big smile on my face and I was giggling.
Then all of my friends and cousins wanted to have a swim in our plastic pool in my backyard. We went outside and jumped in the pool. SPLASH we got very very very soaked. We were playing with the noodles. We were acting like they were unicorns. We hopped on them and we grabbed the tall part and we faced it down and put it on our heads and said Giddy up. It was awesome fun.
Then we got dry with our towels.
Finally it got dark and we went to sleep for school.
Going to the skate park
On Saturday afternoon my family and I went to the skatepark in Kaikohe to play on the playground. First I got my skateboard and I slid down the ramp. I felt amazing because it was fun. Then we slid down the massive hole. I thought that was cool. Next we went to the park to play on the swings. I was swinging very high. It was getting scary. I felt like I was getting butterflies in my tummy. After that mum got me down. Then we went home.
All my cousins were there. We were playing fortnite and 1b1.
We were in a real game. I got the win and I got so much good loot. I felt happy. I had a big smile on my face and I was giggling.
Then all of my friends and cousins wanted to have a swim in our plastic pool in my backyard. We went outside and jumped in the pool. SPLASH we got very very very soaked. We were playing with the noodles. We were acting like they were unicorns. We hopped on them and we grabbed the tall part and we faced it down and put it on our heads and said Giddy up. It was awesome fun.
Then we got dry with our towels.
Finally it got dark and we went to sleep for school.
Friday, June 5, 2020
Recount Writing-On Saturday
On Saturday
On Saturday morning me and my family went to the pools in Whangarei for a swim.
First when we got there we went to get changed into our togs .
I felt so excited I was jumping up and down and waving my hands around.
Next we went out to the pool to have a swim. When I got to the pool I bombed in. SPLASH!
The water was very cold. I felt freezing.
My body was shivering all over. So I got out and quickly ran to the hot tub to get warmed up. I stepped into the hot tub and the warm water heated me up. It was so lovely and relaxing . After that i got out and went to get changed in my clothes.I felt great Because i had an
Amazing time at the pools.
On Saturday morning me and my family went to the pools in Whangarei for a swim.
First when we got there we went to get changed into our togs .
I felt so excited I was jumping up and down and waving my hands around.
Next we went out to the pool to have a swim. When I got to the pool I bombed in. SPLASH!
The water was very cold. I felt freezing.
My body was shivering all over. So I got out and quickly ran to the hot tub to get warmed up. I stepped into the hot tub and the warm water heated me up. It was so lovely and relaxing . After that i got out and went to get changed in my clothes.I felt great Because i had an
Amazing time at the pools.
We were learning about how to write a Recount.
I found it easy to write who I went with.
I found it hard to write long sentences.
I really enjoyed thinking of juicy words to use in my writing.
Next time I need to write faster.
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