Recount Writing-Riding my quad

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Riding my quad

On Saturday afternoon I rode my Quad around our
paddock down the bottom at our farm.

Taria was riding the quad with me.

First I did some skids and drifties.
It was very fun because it was like we were
chasing some bad guys. It was fun.

Next I rode my quad around the bumps.
We were going up and down and going through things. 

There was a BIG pile of prickles so I went around it
and I got pricked. Ouch!  I got the prickle out. 

After that I went to do some more drifties and
we saw a sand tornado.

Next I went home to watch youtube of scary videos.

I watched a video where there was a guy who
caught slender man  climbing  a building. 
Me and Taria were scared. Finally it got dark.
I had amazing time.